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高中英語選修英語寫作考后寫作講評探究課-廈門大學附屬實驗中學
Teaching Plan
Teaching objectives:
Help students learn to polish their writing task especially after a test;
Help students have a review of the basic steps to write a good composition;
Help students collect some useful vocabulary to describe the location and some common phrases that
help to enhance coherence of the writing;
Guide students to learn from each other through discussion and presentation; Arouse students’ interest and confidence in writing by cooperative learning.
Teaching focus:
Help students form the good habit of writing with five basic steps and polishing their writing before the final edition.
Teaching difficulty:
How to polish the writing efficiently.
Teaching procedures: Step 1 Lead-in
Show the class the writing task they completed in the monthly test and review what they have learn about writing the similar topic. Step 2 Presentation
Present the five-step writing procedure. Use some easy tasks to help them get into the habit of writing that way.
Help students collect some useful vocabulary to describe the location and some common phrases that help to enhance coherence of the writing. Step 3 Appreciation
Give the class a reference writing and help them to appreciate some good expressions in it.
Give the class some good examples written by some of them and help them learn to appreciate good writings. Step 4 Practice
Give students two selected compositions. They need choose one and discuss in groups about how to polish it. Grammar mistakes and improper expressions are both what they need to deal with. They can write down their suggestions on the learning sheet first and exchange the opinions later. Step 5 Presentation
Invite representatives of two or three groups to have a presentation. Make comments if necessary. Step 6 Homework (Choose one)
A: Rewrite the task again. (Encourage them to write with their own style). B: Write a new one shown on the learning sheet.
公 開 課 學 案
How to write a letter to introduce a place
--考后試卷書面表達講評
書面表達(月考)
假如你是校學生會主席李華，你校的一位外教Tom想在你市尋找一套80平米左右的公寓居住。幾日前，你在
四季花園小區(qū)內看到一處。下面是小區(qū)位置及周邊情況簡圖。請用英語給他寫一封信，向他介紹一下情況。 內容包括：
1. 小區(qū)的地理位置； 2. 小區(qū)的地理優(yōu)勢；
注意：
①字數(shù)100字左右；
②可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； ③開頭，結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯： 四季花園：Seasonal Garden Dear Tom，
You wrote in your letter that you wanted to rent ____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Are you satisfied with it If so, I will arrange it for you. Yours, LiHua
Step 1 審題構思很關鍵
審題
1．確定體裁：本文為說明文；
2．確定人稱：本文的主要人稱應為第三人稱； 3．確定時態(tài)：主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。 構思
第一部分：引出話題。 第二部分：房屋簡介。 第三部分：全文總結。 Step 2 核心詞匯想周全
1．80平方米的公寓
2．小區(qū) 3．坐落在…… 4．十字路口 5．生活配套 6．方便舒適 7．公共交通
常用方位表達法
(in/to/on the) south / north / east / west of ... beside / next to / close to / near...
on the opposite side of.../ opposite.../ across... not far from / within your easy reach / be easy of access
Step 3 由詞擴句雛形現(xiàn)
1. 最近，我碰巧看到一個80平方米的公寓，它可能適合你。
2．在它的周圍有超市、中心醫(yī)院、常春藤高中，對面還有銀行。
3. 四季花園小區(qū)位于民族南路和修業(yè)路交匯的十字路口。
4. 小區(qū)后面有一個花園，結束一天的工作之后，你可以在公園里散步放松一下。
Step 4 句式升級造亮點
5. 把句3改為復合句，含分詞短語
6. 把句4改為含復合句，含定語從句
Step 5 過渡銜接聯(lián)成篇 常用銜接詞歸納： 1) 表層次:
firstly, to begin with, for one thing... secondly, still, furthermore, for another... thirdly, next, besides, in addition, what's more... finally, last but not least... 2) 表轉折和讓步；
on the contrary, however, nevertheless, on the other hand, yet,
although, though, in spite of, regardless of, even so, after all, despite the fact that... 3) 表因果；
therefore, consequently, thus, so, as a result, as a consequence, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to 4）表遞近：
Furthermore, moreover, what is more, besides, also, not only...but also..., in addition 5) 表總結：
in a word, in brief, in conclusion, in short, all in all, in summary, 6) 其他
for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, frankly speaking, in other words, in my view/opinion, as far as I'm/sth. be concerned, ... 參考范文：
Dear Tom，
You wrote in your letter that you wanted to rent an apartment in our city. Recently I happened to find an 80-square-meter flat that might be suitable for you.
Located at the crossing of Minzu South Street and Xiuye Road, Seasonal Garden is the best community I would like to recommend to you. Around it there exists a supermarket, a central hospital, a Changqingteng High School as well as a bank standing across the street. I figure these life facilities are bound to make your stay convenient and comfortable. Besides, public transportation is also within your easy reach. Buses No. 23, 28 and 40 can take you everywhere you want to go in our city. What's more, behind the community is a beautiful park, where you can go jogging to have good relaxation after a day's work.
Are you satisfied with it? If so, I will arrange it for you. Yours, Lihua
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